Another pitch slap article.
One of the best bits of fortune cookie-style writing advice I’ve ever gotten has been this: Readers read words, not minds.
When a reader picks up a book, they’re reading the words, the paragraphs, the chapters. It no longer matters what the author meant, or wanted to imply, or included in the 50-page compendium of world-building notes. The words on the page are all.
Here’s the thing: Writers read with their minds, readers read with their eyes. The writer already knows what’s happening, what it all means, why the characters do what they do, all before ever sitting down to look through what they’ve written. It all makes sense, not because the words-on-the-page explain it, but because the writer’s brain knows all.
All this leads me to our latest 50-word story summary sent in earlier this month by author B Hughes-Millman for some feedback.
Title: Purgatory’s Angel
Genre: Paranormal Romance
Once a mighty archangel, Jaime is on earth hunting those who kill the innocent in their sleep. Then she meets the handsome demon in a dream she can’t remember. When she wakes, he’s still alive, but he must have died or she wouldn’t have woken.
I think you know where I’m going with this. Here are some off-the-cuff thoughts as I read:
I suspect none of these oddball questions I asked even occurred to the author. But the reader doesn’t have the advantage of seeing around the corner. The reader doesn’t have the author’s mental footnotes and annotations. More clarity is needed.
Wait, don’t you want to get your readers curious? Make them ask questions? Continue reading